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Lovemybuellman
| | Posted on Sunday, February 28, 2010 - 12:04 pm: | 
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okay broken up and done =) |
Cityxslicker
| | Posted on Sunday, February 28, 2010 - 12:15 pm: |
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dont forget the unwritten chapter of the Dirty Griffen that never was..... |
Court
| | Posted on Sunday, February 28, 2010 - 12:20 pm: |
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>>>>This new company has a contract with Harley Davidson
Should read: This new company was granted a license from Harley Davidson |
Etennuly
| | Posted on Sunday, February 28, 2010 - 06:33 pm: |
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In the fifth paragraph, the one about Erik's history, you have a place to put another paragraph break that will easily work.
Where ".....F81M Kawasaki.stop/start In the mid 70's....". The thoughts being where he started the next being where he went next.
Are you typing all of this in the BadWeB post window or on a Word program or Note Pad? |
Firebolt020283
| | Posted on Sunday, February 28, 2010 - 10:38 pm: |
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I was using Open office while she was using MS office 08 for mac. H3ere school had a proof reading program on it that she used before she turned it in much like the Court posted above. she has since gotten it back and turned it in so every one wish her luck. |
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